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Thursday, 15 February 2018

Onomatopoeia Poem

WALT To use onomatopoeia in poetry


In this poem I think I have done good because I put in some good describing words. Maybe next time I could try and make it rhyme.


Onomatopoeia Poem


Bam, pop, kapow, Bam pop kapow,
I see the sparkly fireworks go bursting in the night sky.


Fizz, whoosh, bang, Fizz whoosh bang,
I hear the loud fireworks go up into the sky.


Bang, sizzle, crackle, Bang sizzle, crackle,
I see lots of people looking up at the beautiful fireworks.
But as I look up there gone away.




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