In Room 6 we had to read a ballad about Ben Hall, and the following day we had to do a padlet about ballads. After that our task was to write a ballad of our own, it could of been about anything we wanted. First we had to do some planning for our ballad. For me it was really hard to decide what I was going to do my ballad about. I had so many ideas but I kept on changing my topic. Finally I chose one, I hope I did a good job, and did not go off track. For my rhythm mine was AABBCC we had pick a rhythm because its a ballad.
Back to Reality
Blake was a normal kid, who never slept and was always awake,
He felt an ache,
He was playing cricket
When he found a ticket,
Blake wished he would win all lot,
And go to his favourite shop,
Later that day he realised he had won he flew up in the sky, with happiness he shaked,
To celebrate he had a chocolate cake,
His life was as sweet as a biscuit,
Blake felt proud because everyone said he would never have any money and make it,
The leaves dances in the wind as he screamed “I hit the jackpot” !
Straight away he bought a robot,
All the money he bought a prodigious 10 million dollar house and everyone was amazed,
But then Blake felt a strong headache,
It was as fast as a cheetah running for its pray because in less than a minute,
He felt sad because he had no money, he missed it,
Blake thought of his good old simple life as he walked through the parking lot,
He did not even like all of his fancy coats,
It felt funny the Earth started to shake it was an Earthquake,
But then Blake realised he was in his bed, when he heard his mum yell out “Blake”
There was no more happy spirit,
But at least Blake still had his favourite sport and his special trumpet,
Blake was thankful because he still had his bed his special spot,
Also his cute pet Goat,
Blake went to the lounge and smelled buttermilk pancakes,
Then it all came back to him he felt the same good old Blake,
He was overjoyed because all he needed was his family, and he didn't miss a thing,
He was back to reality and the alarm clock started to ring,
So he rested in and turned off the clock,
As he lay down he thought my dream had an awesome plot,
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