Facts About The Commonwealth Games

What I did well : I think I did well by making my text clear and easy to read.

What I need to work on : I need to work on having more detail in my work.

What I enjoyed : I enjoyed learning lot's of interesting facts.

Transformation

What I did well : I did well by making my own pictures.
What I enjoyed : I enjoyed doing some transitions with my objects.
What I need to work on : I need to work on adding more detail.

Anzac Day Diamante Poem

What I did well : I think I did well at describing how the Anzac Veterans felt, and what they were fighting for.
What I need to work on : I need to work on adding more photos.
What I enjoyed : I enjoyed drawing the poppies and using words to describe the Anzac Veterans.

The service of light

What I did well: I think I did well at describing what was going on in the slides.
What I enjoyed : I enjoyed drawing on paper and computer.
What I need to work on : I think I need to work on making my drawings look more detailed.

Winter Olympics

Walt : Choose an appropriate app to show your research about the Winter Olympics.

What I did well : I think I did well by summarising all my information.

What I enjoyed : I enjoyed making my front page look like winter.

What I need to work on : I need to work on answering more of the questions and adding more detail. 

Shrove Tuesday

WALT : Read information to gather facts about what you learned

What I did good : I did good by summarising all of my information and making my own images. Maybe next time I could add more detail

What I enjoyed :  I enjoyed drawing my own pictures.

Onomatopoeia Poem

WALT To use onomatopoeia in poetry

In this poem I think I have done good because I put in some good describing words. Maybe next time I could try and make it rhyme.

Onomatopoeia Poem

Bam, pop, kapow, Bam pop kapow,

I see the sparkly fireworks go bursting in the night sky.

Fizz, whoosh, bang, Fizz whoosh bang,

I hear the loud fireworks go up into the sky.

Bang, sizzle, crackle, Bang sizzle, crackle,

I see lots of people looking up at the beautiful fireworks.
But as I look up there gone away.