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Wednesday, 30 August 2017

Red Colour Poem

                             Red,
Red is the strawberries that make my tastebuds fly,
Red is the cherries that make lovely pie.
Red is the fire that burns houses down,
Red is the lava that spreads through the town.
Red is the ruby’s which Birthstone is July,
Red is the blood that makes us cry.

I love red because
it’s the colour of the delicious strawberries.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mikaela I love the red colour poem. Very impressed with your descriptions. They make the colour red sound so exciting.

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  2. Hi Mikaela it's Isabel. I like the way you made it rhyme and added detail with the excellent words.

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    1. Thank you Isabel,
      For taking the time out of your day to comment on my blog post.

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