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Friday, 18 August 2017

Water, Water, Everywhere


WALT: create a poem or piece of writing about downpour of rain.

Water, Water, Everywhere

When it rains it’s cold outside and you have to wear rain coats and warm clothes. When you go outside you get wet hair and you end up soaking wet, you can smell fresh rain and you can see people holding umbrellas, raindrops falling everywhere , kids jumping in puddles and people running towards shelter. When you look down you can see disgusting worms slithering across the concrete and the muddy grass making your shoes dirty. When you look up at the sky you can see the white clouds turning dark grey, and you can hear people complaining about how cold it is and raindrops crashing hard on the roof. You can feel cold wet rain smashing against your face, the strong wind pushing you, and your wet clothes making you feel cold. When you go inside your house you can see the condensation on the windows, you can feel water on your back leaking from the roof and you can feel the hot air coming from the heat pump making you feel warm. Also you get stressed if there is going to be a storm, because of how bad the rain is. At least you get to watch t.v inside and drink hot chocolate.

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